October 21, 2011
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Sort Of
I like you
But I am not in like with you
Okay so maybe I am
Maybe I am so in like with you
Like: When white hot orbs fall from the sky tumbling to my feet to
tickle my toes
Like: When Dipuc's arrow is stuck in places you can't find on bodies worth exploring
Like: When you fall and I pick you up
Comments (18)
Anything with Dipuc's arrow in it is worth a rec!
(Good meter, too!)
I'm not really sure about the meaning of the latter half of these poem, but I'm sure I would if I was smurt. The overall was well-done and very amusing.
...places you can't find on bodies worth exploring, indeed.
Oh Nelson, you are as deep as I am shallow . This is beautiful
Where is the ode to homemade soap?
I'm in like with this!
Now that is a like I like! :)
I like this.
You know something? It is incredibly hard to admit when I am "in like" with someone.
Came here on a Rec. This was a really nice piece! Ahh, the feeling of "so in like".
I'm so old school, I had never heard of Dipuc. Almost goggled it, then it hit me. You really should just block me from coming over here.
Nicely done.
@BookMark61 - Thank you for complimenting me on my meter...and @WildWomanOfTheWest - I googled Dipuc and found there is a whole website dedicated to him/her...
@distractedbyzombies - There is no real secret meaning in this I don't think...well I mean other than playing with what words mean...I mean this is pretty small...
@seedsower - Thank you
...Though my mom had many points of her own, I can't remember homemade soup being one of them...she liked lentil soup though and I just couldn't come around...hmm...
@awoolham - I am in like that you in like it.
@heart_beep - It does seem beeper-ish...
@TheSecretLifeOfPandas - It is tough...a leap of sorts...
@Cestovatelka - 'tis true and fleeting...
...thank you...
@WildWomanOfTheWest - but it is my favorite comment
@Finity - Thank you dearest...
SOOOOOOOOOOOOAP.....not soup, but I do love Lentil soup....with out pubic hair of course.
@HereLiesNelsontheGreat - I just meant I hadn't the slightest about white orbs or Dipuc. It wasn't meant as a criticism so much as an admission.
@distractedbyzombies - oh okay...well the white orbs were stars and you probably know Dipuc by now...
@seedsower - ha oh yes...how could I forget...it shall be my next post...
@HereLiesNelsontheGreat - Nope, not yet. I am wallowing in my ignorance still.
What are these 'stars' you speak of, anyway?
I have no trouble acknowledging being in like. But I don't usually take it very seriously.
@distractedbyzombies - They are these gaseous orbs that may be dead already...we see them as specks in the sky at night...
@HereLiesNelsontheGreat - giant space farts? surely you jest.