August 26, 2012
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Snapped
It was easier to live a life of boredom than dealing
With the crushing blow that it could all go away with a snap.It was a corpse.
There was nothing surprising in that. Yet they found it and buried it with a direct and noble somberness. Those that bury wait for 'snap' that never came, they just got to watch and it made them old, not just elderly, but old. Those snaps that play in soundtracks that slowly beat in the back of one's mind, until they become too much and you have to disconnect in a way or another.
This lead weight, he sits, these arms that flail around as they moved him. They couldn't figure out the cause of death, most just assumed it was old age. No autopsy was performed, the county was trying to cut back on expenses and there weren't enough trained coroners in all of Florida to keep up. They had a cermony for Earnest P. Merriweather, but no one showed up.
40. Write a STORY about elderly people coming upon something curious. ( 5 pts)
Comments (6)
great work
this is an interesting piece. I enjoy some of the concepts you created; the soundtrack in particular. Thanks for sharing.
I had a college friend who came on a corpse in a rest stop somewhere in Kansas, I think. It didn't pop but it hissed. Enough said.
oh, that's sad.
"Pop. Pop. Fizz-Fizz (oh what a relief it is!)" REALLY enjoyed this, N E LS O N. MUAH.
heh. the comments are almost as great as the story.