August 15, 2012
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Sexual Feeling
I was shaking
She was shaking
There was moving back
There was moving forth
Pillow
Purple
Am I killing her
No
Everything is fine
This has to happen
Sooner
Later
Is this the right thing
Nothing is happening
We eat food
Romantic looks are expressed18. Write a POEM about your first sexual experience. ( 6 ps)
Comments (9)
Oh I like this very much. It's a brilliant fun piece and the last line seals the deal.
@awoolham - Thank you dear
so lovely
Oh Nelson! hehe. I feel like a peeping tom!
Oh Nelson. heh. Also, I love your header photo.
The passive voice in there is killer.
@godfatherofgreenbay - The Police
@murisopsis - Look away!!!
@anvilsandedelweiss - Thank you I thought about incorporating it somehow...like just doing the scavengers by the numbers up there...
@Finity - Psychokiller...
lol your poem captures the awkwardness so well
@jzrocker - There is no awkwardness here at all