December 6, 2012
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Poetry revised
I have been trying hard
To kill poetry
As if it wasn't deadWait for
simple in action
simple inactionThis is a poem that contains no deep metaphors
No deep level of meaning
I mean what I say
And I say what I mean
Why complicate it
In an era of complication
Metaphors were made for 1950
When access was limited
Information scarce
If I sound jaded
I assure you I am not
This isn't fiction
It is fractionI am direct with you because I am devoid of creativity
And originality
I am not selling anything
Just wasting time
Comments (6)
Clever
You have to submit this poem to a journal. It's one of your best. I love it.
Oh, Nelly.
For not trying hard, you came up with a masterpiece Nelson!
@awoolham - @Finity - You're making me blush
@heart_beep - ha...oh the irony...
@christao408 - thank you..
I think I may understand what this poem is about. Maybe. Unless it means something else.